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ok. when you change from the arpeggio stuff (single string, like at the start), to the strumming, you change time signatures. This can be really useful, and it's hard to tell if it works without lyrics, but at the moment it makes it sound disjointed, almost as if you don't know what you are doing, and I know you do.
Again, without lyrics it is hard to tell, but I feel it needs like...a bridge, an alternate section about 3/4 of the way through, just to break up the song abit, and to move away from the same chords, or even just a different rhythm.
Apart from that, great work, it's a really good first effort!
24/03/2008
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